Please critique my MtG deck

[PeaceNJoy]

Here's my proposed deck. The success hinges on Wild Pair. All creatures fall into one of three categories: Power + Toughness=2, P + T= 8, and P+T= 12. Of course, I would use the less expensive creatures in each category to bring in the more expensive ones (if wild pair is in play). I want this to be a deck that's legal in standard:

Land 18

4 Simic growth Chamber
4 Breeding Pool
5 Islands
5 Forests


Creatures 29

4 Hunted Wumpus
1 Simic Sky Swallower
2 Deep Sea Kraken
1 Protean Hulk
3 Flying Men
1 Scryb Ranger
1 Looter il-Kor
1 Ætherplasm
1 Llanowar Elves
1 Drifter il-Dal
1 Greenseeker
1 Coiling Oracle
1 Essence Warden
1 Wood Elves
1 Prodigal Sorcerer
3 Imaginary Pet
1 Jodah's Avenger
1 Scarwood Treefolk
3 Brooding Saurian

Other Spells 13

1 Wurmcalling
3 Flight
4 Wild Pair
1 Utopia Sprawl
1 Levitation
2 Trade Routes
1 Aspect of Mongoose

60 Total

Thanks...

[naturesnake]

Looks good, but take out some of those growth chambers and brooding grounds for normal lands. 8 is too many!

[PeaceNJoy]

I wonder if I should work in a Darksteel Garrison...

Oh crap, Imaginary Pet is no longer legal in Standard

notes: - Protean Hulk is no longer legal, -Simic Sky Swallower illegal, -SImic growth chamber and breeding pool illegal, use  Arctic Nishoba? use Guile? use Ravaging Riftwurm? use Sea Monster? USE VIGOR!!! (must be missing something...vigor is too good), hehehe --> OakGNarl Warrior, Æthersnipe?, Fog Elemental!!!, Platinum Angel?, Seedguide Ash?, Serra Sphinx?, Scarwood Treefolk is still legal, brooding s is still legal, Mosswort Bridge, Pendelhaven?, Yavimaya Coast, Sinbad?, SIDEBOARD: Frozen Aether?, Temporal Eddy (to bring land back), Walk the Aeons?, Baru, Fist of Krosa?, Hunting Wilds?, Elvish Berserker! COMBO --> Elvish Piper!, Gaea's Herald!, Kithkin Daggerdare?, Pendelhaven Elder  

            NEW DECK:
LAND (18 ):
Forest x4
PendelHaven x4
Island x8
Yavimaya Coast X2

CREATURES:
Hunted Wumpus x4
Deep-Sea Kraken x1 (or guile)
Vigor x1
Flying Men x3
Elvish Piper x2

OTHER SPELLS:
Wild Pair x4
Shimmering Wings x3
Darksteel Garrison